Ooh, lovely! I think one thing which could make it even more interesting is to explain more about the Deplorable Word beforehand, to build up the tension a bit. Obviously I have no idea how I would go about this, but I have more faith in your imaginative abilities. :)
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Date: 2005-12-17 06:21 pm (UTC)