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kauket:

get get get over
it vanilla diet coke right
every shining

verlaine:

rejection matt matt
housemate matt sent me an
excited text last

and

i give you all the
drama and heartache of real
buffy v so last

(I like this one because he's such a fervent apologist for Buffy Season 5, or V if you think in Latin)

Date: 2003-08-21 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verlaine.livejournal.com
I liked my rejection haiku too - but was forced to discard it on the purist grounds that "housemate" does not in fact have three syllables. Foolish machine!

Date: 2003-08-21 01:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluedevi.livejournal.com
There is that, but I seem to remember hearing that 5-6-5 is an acceptable form for a haiku as well as 5-7-5. I don't really believe them, but what the heck, it made me laugh.

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