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[devi]

I've done haikus for lots of people. But this is the best yet.

cheerfulcynic:

dum dum dum dum dum
dum dum dum dum dum dum dum
dum dum dum dum dum

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[sciamachy.livejournal.com]

That's a senryu - there's no seasonal reference in it, or pause.

Cherry blossoms dum;
dum dum dum dum dum dum dum
dum dum dum dum dum!

...would be a haiku.

Heh:)

[cheerfulcynic.livejournal.com]

The one it did for me myself wasn't as good as that:)

Re: Heh:)

[bluedevi.livejournal.com]

The spooky thing is I can hear you saying it, with a sort of dryly amused wag of the head.

A nice Wimborne:

[verlaine.livejournal.com]

this simple all i
want to know if i thought there
was any chance i could

And then

[verlaine.livejournal.com]

I expected no less from argyraspid:

take the battle of
austerlitz allegedly
napoleon's finest

Classic Davefish:

[verlaine.livejournal.com]

london clubbing and
shrews i've had a lovely
weekend on friday

Really scary one!

[verlaine.livejournal.com]

shawn_club:

candle the most fear
into you what terrorfies you
a crippling long night