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[devi]

I've done haikus for lots of people. But this is the best yet.

cheerfulcynic:

dum dum dum dum dum
dum dum dum dum dum dum dum
dum dum dum dum dum

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[sciamachy.livejournal.com]

That's a senryu - there's no seasonal reference in it, or pause.

Cherry blossoms dum;
dum dum dum dum dum dum dum
dum dum dum dum dum!

...would be a haiku.