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devi ([personal profile] devi) wrote2003-08-21 05:05 pm
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I've done haikus for lots of people. But this is the best yet.

cheerfulcynic:

dum dum dum dum dum
dum dum dum dum dum dum dum
dum dum dum dum dum
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[identity profile] sciamachy.livejournal.com 2003-08-21 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
That's a senryu - there's no seasonal reference in it, or pause.

Cherry blossoms dum;
dum dum dum dum dum dum dum
dum dum dum dum dum!

...would be a haiku.
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